Father's day card

I got this idea from the last issue of Papercrafts magazine. I thought I would use the idea of making a card that (somewhat) resembled a man's shirt/tie. I added a pocket to it. The Baja Breeze tie is still a little narrow and not very manly, but it was the only SU ribbon that I had that matched this paper. I am still not sure if I like it yet. I have a workshop Monday, and they wanted a Father's day card that the students at the daycare could make. What do you think?